It is 2.00pm in the afternoon my mum and dad laid on the couch mum fell asleep dad watched the rugby then the doorbell rang I go to the door I screamed in fear it was the man who live in cafe across the street.He pushes me against the door.He tries and looks for my mum and dad I follow him I saw my mum and dad disappear I luckily he did not see that happen yells at me.He said “where's your mum and dad”.I say I I don't know.he said find them now!.NO you shouldn't be here so leave.He says no no no…
I was learning to imagine the world was disappearing.
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